@CameronWells6 I'm really engrossed in reading your book. I really think you have a great concept. I do think it needs editing. I hope you'll read my comments. they aren't meant to be anything but helpful! also, I'm an amateur editor, and I'd love to help you and get my name out there as an editor, get the experience. I'm helping a couple of others here, and I'd love to help you, if you'd like. if you're interested, please pm me and let me know. together, I think we could tighten up your book and get it published. it's that good a concept! and I don't think it's been written before... :) I hope I can at least help with my comments if you don't want my help as an editor. :)