@CamrynKissel
I just wanted to say thanks so much for your support on my stories. You always vote so fast on all of them. Thank-you!
@JesseMyLove84 I have an poll up if you want to vote on it on my Adam Ruzek long-lost older sister story.
Tysm! for the votes :)) Means alot to me. :D
@ArachneCleoSemiramis you're welcome. Also, I love your stories and would you like to check out my Ninjago stories?
✨ Chapter 1: Fights on the First Day of Elementary School
This is such a sweet story! I love how much care you’ve put into the characters and how involved Jay is as a parent
Just as a friendly thought (and I’m definitely not a pro writer or anything! ), I did find this chapter a little tricky to follow at times — mostly because of the quick scene changes and the long list of names all at once . And sometimes a line will repeat the same idea in a slightly different way, which can make it feel a bit jumpy.
That said, this is such an awesome start and I really enjoyed reading it You’re doing amazing just by putting your story out there!! Keep going, I’d love to see more ✨
Hello I like your Liberty kids story can you write more stories like that? Please?
Can you start the new story can you follow each episode
Can you make a Chicago fire Kelly love story
Can you change the main character to chilli twin sister can you have the main character come in season 4 episode 13
@LynnButler4 Kelly and the female main character will have relationship drama with each other the main character and Kelly started seeing each other they were at fire academy together with Stella Kidd
Hey there, my friend. :) I hope you’re doing great with your stories, of course. Well, here’s a new draft for an AU Cobra Kai vampire ficlet collection I’ve been working on:
His fangs hidden, Hawk simply smiled as he sat in the chair next to the bed where a now terrified male kidnapper was lying; the latter was dressed in his usual clothes, with a gag covering his mouth, and his legs and wrists tied down.
His azure eyes shining, Hawk then said, “Other criminals? Almost all of them don’t listen to me. But you do. You trust me. You do what I say, not because it’s what I want, but because you know in your heart that I’m right. I give you... a lesson about life. Why? You need to learn that abducting innocent people is a crime.”
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Pretty cool so far, huh? What do you think would happen next?
Hey there. :) I’ve been working out my AU Cobra Kai story “The Ethical Vampiress”. And I got to wondering... how would Counselor Blatt react if she discovered Abigail’s vampire status? And how would Johnny, Kreese and Silver’s reactions be?
@CamrynKissel Superb. :) What would he try to do to Abigail, and how would she defend herself? And what would Silver do, if he attempts the “Silver Bullet” move on Abigail and it fails and she says something like “It’s not like I need the oxygen, anyway”?
@CamrynKissel Quite unique. :) How would Kreese react to Abigail telling him she doesn’t think the Cobra Kai motto of “Strike First, Strike Hard, No Mercy” would work in a battle against an enemy if said enemy was a vampire such as herself?
I’ve been thinking of an AU scenario where Counselor Blatt finds out Reader’s being a vampire, and Reader says something like, “Oh, I guess you’ll probably expel me just because of my being nosferatu, since a vampire like myself probably isn’t or wouldn’t be allowed at West Valley High — huh, Counselor Blatt?”
Counselor Blatt, who’s as equally as surprised as Hawk is (except at Reader’s revealing her own vampire status), is caught off-guard, as she can’t think of an answer to that.
At that moment, the Cobras, Miguel, Demetri, Hawk and the Miyagi-Dos exchange puzzled glances, as they can’t help wondering whether or not vampires like Reader are or should be allowed in high school (although they can obviously pass themselves off as human in a sense).
What do you think would happen next?
I meant, how would Reader react to Hawk’s confessing of wanting to become a vampire along with his friends?
Hey there. :) Thanks for leaving nice feedback on the chapter “Abby’s Secret Revealed” from “The Ethical Vampiress”. Could you please leave some nice feedback on the previous chapter “The New Student”? I’d appreciate it, and thanks. :)