CamrynKissel

New Chapter is out.
          	https://www.wattpad.com/story/394542490

JesseMyLove84

I just wanted to say thanks so much for your support on my stories. You always vote so fast on all of them. Thank-you!

JesseMyLove84

@JesseMyLove84 sure. I'll look for it.
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CamrynKissel

@JesseMyLove84 I have an poll up if you want to vote on it on my Adam Ruzek long-lost older sister story.
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CamrynKissel

@JesseMyLove84 you're welcome. Thank you for your support on my stories as well.
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JesseMyLove84

✨ Chapter 1: Fights on the First Day of Elementary School
          
          This is such a sweet story! I love how much care you’ve put into the characters and how involved Jay is as a parent 
          
          Just as a friendly thought (and I’m definitely not a pro writer or anything! ), I did find this chapter a little tricky to follow at times — mostly because of the quick scene changes and the long list of names all at once ‍. And sometimes a line will repeat the same idea in a slightly different way, which can make it feel a bit jumpy.
          
          That said, this is such an awesome start and I really enjoyed reading it  You’re doing amazing just by putting your story out there!! Keep going, I’d love to see more ✨

CamrynKissel

@JesseMyLove84 Thanks and I enjoy reading your stories.
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JesseMyLove84

@JesseMyLove84 No problem! I do really enjoy reading them, though. I promise.
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CamrynKissel

@JesseMyLove84 Thanks for the Honest opinion.
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