Carlisle25

Hi,  can i ask u a favor? I just published a new story...  Can you check it out for me?  I really need feedback since ang tagal kong nastop magsulat.  I would really appreciate it.  Thank you! 
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/265125967?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=itmustbeserendipity&wp_originator=BVwuyL%2BUYfCe78bwP1emDw2hfuaJI2JvAr%2FBlIfiKPUDsR8iTSDx3C%2Ft2DMKxEFbvIaFyHT6HmIyPY2x4n5NrAU0lDYuXPb7%2F2kyUyqDm0vt%2B3al%2BQ%2BqemBQfj3a0cen