lilyastor
Howdydoo, I’m probably the most annoying of your day BUT, I was just wondering if you could check out my new poetry book called “raindrops and honeysuckles” it’s filled with small poems that I’ve written.
It would mean a great lot to me if you read and maybe gave me some feedback. Have a wonderful day, toodles (:
https://my.w.tt/w29PUnjfiQ
lilyastor
Ah cool, thanks. And yeah, about seventeen, I wasn’t sure how to word that but I’ll try I out like you said. Thanks (:
Casual-Fandom-Prince
@BrianneMorris I really enjoyed your poems, I loved the journey that it took me through, focusing it on the events in this persons life you really wanted me to see, short but sweet really works in this scenario, the one spelling mistake I picked up on was on seventeen and that was 'you made my own friends, hate me more than myself?' try wording it like 'you made my friends hate me more than i hate myself', idk that's just a minor thing, but other than that it was a solid read.