@CatherineKeyser
Oh no, I greatly appreciate your help! I am always eager to learn from my mistakes so that I will not make them again.
I'm glad you like my story. I've had the plot idea for quite a while - a few years at least - but I never actually took the time to put it into writing. I'm glad I started working on it again.
Thank you for your comments and suggestions; I have corrected everything. I did not realize my mistakes, so I am grateful for your help.
I'm flattered you asked! I only made suggestions. You don't have to make the changes if you don't want to. My feelings won't be hurt. Proud of you! And, having never used this app before, thanks for showing it to me.