vortex_the_jolteon
Dis u?
ChaoticArtist555
@vortex_the_jolteon OK I say you actually have, some advice would be to explore the characters more and to not drift off from the main plot. Those are basic mistakes so don't feel too bad and it's actually going pretty well
vortex_the_jolteon
Oh so its kinda like drum and lyre, high school? Im still at high school but im going to my 2 yrs of senior high in preparation for collage/university....btw be honest with me i can take it how is my writing across all of my books have i improved?