ChloAndCo

It's a really old story I started so it's kinda bad but if people are interested did anyone want to read this?
          	
          	I was born in a ramshackle house, not far from Shemilt City. My life was probably one of the most exciting lives I could have had, and it all started like this...
          	
          	"Mum! The dog pee'd on the carpet again!" I shouted, not knowing this was going to get me into a lot ot trouble, however, if I hadn't have done this my life would have been completely changed, because this is where my impossible journey begins. "No honey, you're dreaming, you're in bed, not in the hall. and what's happened to your poor face?!" "Oh, it's nothing." but that was the biggest lie in my life because it was much more important than just 'nothing' this was probably the most important 'nothing' of my life. That was the marks of my first 'true' kiss! I had already fallen in love, even though it felt like I'd only just even learnt that word. My one true love, and I'm not just saying that to make her think I love her more, she is definitely my love, my only love, and I will NEVER let her go. She doesn't live in this country, which to be honest makes our love a little bit more exciting, she lives in a wonderful country called South Africa, it's not just wonderful because of the amazing wildlife and beautiful scenery, but it's mostly beautiful because of the way she describes it, the sound of her voice, the way her lips move when she talks, everything about her makes it sound beautiful, 'South Africa' it makes me smile just saying it. She also has a beautiful name: 'Kya' it means 'diamond in the sky' which I personally think is the most appropriate name for her, it definitely fits the description of her eyes, and she has beautiful black skin. I love her, I hate anyone who is racist about her, I even turned on my used-to-be best friend. It was her or him, an easy choice to make.
          	
          	This doesn't sound like a blurb because it isn't. This is meant to be the first chapter actually... Is that ok??

ChloAndCo

@ChloAndCo Thanks! ^•^ Just to warn you im inconsistent at updating lol but ill start soon
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MayaRatala

It's great, I love the description and I think you should go for it! You've already got one reader ☺️
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ChloAndCo

It's a really old story I started so it's kinda bad but if people are interested did anyone want to read this?
          
          I was born in a ramshackle house, not far from Shemilt City. My life was probably one of the most exciting lives I could have had, and it all started like this...
          
          "Mum! The dog pee'd on the carpet again!" I shouted, not knowing this was going to get me into a lot ot trouble, however, if I hadn't have done this my life would have been completely changed, because this is where my impossible journey begins. "No honey, you're dreaming, you're in bed, not in the hall. and what's happened to your poor face?!" "Oh, it's nothing." but that was the biggest lie in my life because it was much more important than just 'nothing' this was probably the most important 'nothing' of my life. That was the marks of my first 'true' kiss! I had already fallen in love, even though it felt like I'd only just even learnt that word. My one true love, and I'm not just saying that to make her think I love her more, she is definitely my love, my only love, and I will NEVER let her go. She doesn't live in this country, which to be honest makes our love a little bit more exciting, she lives in a wonderful country called South Africa, it's not just wonderful because of the amazing wildlife and beautiful scenery, but it's mostly beautiful because of the way she describes it, the sound of her voice, the way her lips move when she talks, everything about her makes it sound beautiful, 'South Africa' it makes me smile just saying it. She also has a beautiful name: 'Kya' it means 'diamond in the sky' which I personally think is the most appropriate name for her, it definitely fits the description of her eyes, and she has beautiful black skin. I love her, I hate anyone who is racist about her, I even turned on my used-to-be best friend. It was her or him, an easy choice to make.
          
          This doesn't sound like a blurb because it isn't. This is meant to be the first chapter actually... Is that ok??

ChloAndCo

@ChloAndCo Thanks! ^•^ Just to warn you im inconsistent at updating lol but ill start soon
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MayaRatala

It's great, I love the description and I think you should go for it! You've already got one reader ☺️
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