@Choco_py i know i have a mizuki pfp, so this is ironic of me to say, but i can assure you im being completely truthful right now. your writing is incredible, and i’ll never take that back. the way you write in first person, describing the grief a character feels so well that it hurts, yet also showing moments of hope during it all..really, i aspire to be able to write dialogue—write in general—as well as you do :)