@Choejhulkp9
Hi, how are you. So you’re familiar with TaNajjaNellum and has suggested to read some of your stories such as Superman in MCU and I read the first chapter. Very intriguing and clever at how you handled Clark in the era when Steve was around and the Celestial within Krypton’s core as well. And having Clark in the past will give him tons of experience of being expose to WWII. I haven’t fully read it through but you’ve done a good job so far.
So the reason I’m here today is TaNajjaNellum recommended I ask you for some pointers regarding an Invincible story only I usually do female x female stuff so Mark the MC is genderbend. He’s already helped with some stuff such as powers Marie will have that will make the character stronger given franchises will include some adaptation of DC or Marvel characters, Supernatural, TVDverse Mortal Kombat or Godzilla. The one thing we agreed on and this is the major and important part is the beginner. The story will focus on the Atom Eve special events but here Marie unlocked her powers at an early age and both her and Eve were fighting crime and being heroes. Marie and Eve are neighbors that live on the opposite side of the street. Debbie and Nolan learn of Marie’s abilities after the special event. So far that’s a good start; but seeing perhaps I’m missing something, perhaps there’s something else that can be done for changes regarding Marie having powers this early and working alongside Eve and childhood friends.
Any thoughts and suggestions as I’m open to any.
The title TaNajjaNellum suggested is Unbreakable.