ChristianWilson796

New vision of my Dream Life, Wealth, Power, and Love novel is coming as soon as I am done writing them on inkitt, first

ChristianWilson796

Okay, second rough draft of Chapter 9 is up for Dream Life... ...Story, I need feedback on it, please. Is this chapter getting too dark? Also, is this becoming too much like my Fallen Angel story? If so, should I change it? (make it a more real life like where people stay dead or keep writing it where a couple of people can never truly die).
          
          I am trying my best to keep Dream Life... ...Storyline different from the Fallen Angel but I do not know if the storylines are starting to run together. I really need help with Dream Life. Comment on my wall or comment in the chapter and share with your friends and let them know that I need all the help I can truly get for this book. Have a great sinful day, night, my Sadomasochist readers

ChristianWilson796

Chapter 6 and 7 of Dream Life... is dark for a reason. I may keep the story dark unless you guys tell me otherwise. To explain the darkness, there will be parts of Jennifer and her family history that pop up throughout the chapters in Italic. James does not know everything about Jennifer and when he does finally put the pieces of Jennifer's past together will it be too late for his well being? Will Jennifer kill him to protect her past life from ever coming out? Is her whole family at risk of death just to hide what was done to her by her stepfather, Johnny?  Please enjoy the rewrite of the Dream Life Story as it now becoming a full hardcore mob story in a time where Sadomasochism is welcome and death is a way of life in this new world that is after the judgment of God. There is no law, no rules, except for the Stoneheart and the Señores Sádicos Families' laws and rules

ChristianWilson796

Just updated Fallen Angel and add chapter 4 to it. Right now I have writer block on Dream Life of Wealth, Power, and Love. So I have been working on my muss (Fallen Angel). I use the Artiquill app on my iPad to proofread Fallen Angel.  Any advice would be great, my friends.

ChristianWilson796

I am mostly updating my stories on Inkitt for right now and once I am happy with the storyline I will update it on here. I cannot figure out on here if people are reading them or not.  However, on Inkitt it shows me how any are reading it plus people on there seems to be helping each other out and no one on here is giving me any feedback