Sorry, Honey. i ate the sun's shine. Am i glowing?

I'm looking for stories to critique. Please, message me if you would like some constructive criticism.

@SoupForBrains Sure thing. I'll make sure to tell you whether or not I do. :)
          

Gah I don't think I ever came up with nicknames for the two of them. Jacoby's just going to stay Flower Boy I think, and Jasslyn's just Princess xD thanks for the comment!

Hey! I'm glad that you like Imaginer, but the point of me saying that wasn't to get repeat comments xD Could you remove two of your three comments, please? I think comments are there to help me out, not just to say "comment." I really appreciate your support, though!