Cmacki200

Good morning, just dropped by here to say thanks for fanning, it means a load!

nice i shall check... thanks

@Cmacki200 Yeah, the top three stories in my list of works. they are the most recent and display how i've improved. 

@AnAdventurer thats good. u say youve got s lot better... so is there a more recent story if urs i could resd which would show that?

@Cmacki200 I'm glad you enjoyed it. And it's funny, all the stuff you pointed outI already know. To be honest, I'm not at all happy with the way the story is turning out. I started it so long ago and I've been writing it on and off. I've greatly improved since I started so what I think I need to do is restart it and write with the skills I have now, rather than continue an already broken story. And thanks for reading :)

@AnAdventurer ha i love ur story! before i qas actually folloeing it without knowing the title. i like ur idea abd the shadow lords are awesome. however i will say i did lose interest at sone points and found the detail and story a bit weak at points. now im not far into just after the second dragon is sighted. i enjoyed the fights a lot and think that they are written impressively well. last criticism would be i didnt feel the main characters were dominating and were strong enough in character to properly captivate the reader but im expected developnent throughout so thats not a bad thing really. finally technically i think theres a few mistakes but ur structure is way better than mine and really clear. all in all really good imaginative story which ill continue to read

one vote is my own btw. a mistake

aha same as my mate. awakening rebirth is a name for a story we both liked but he beat me too it but i done ir anyway. i apolgise ive theyre the same but i assure u theyre orginal. ill check urs out but :-P

hey dude, i just noticed that we have stories with the exact same titles. Isn't that strange?
          
          http://www.wattpad.com/story/481248-awakening-book-1-rebirth-editing

read both. great minds think alike. i love parogar! especially his p.i.e series