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First five edited (though they will be edited again) chapters of my novel are now up on Wattpad. I will be publishing this in the next year or so all go well. Any feedback or comments are appreciated! My writing has definitely improved, I promise. :)
Just got finished up at the launch of the Green Bean Novel Fair at the Irish Writer's Centre. I am so excited to get this novel ready to enter the competition and potential meet 16 agents and publishers. I am ready for this! Please read my latest additions to Terrible Things and help me edit and clean it up! I would really appreciate any critiques!
Chapter 3 - Symptoms from 'Terrible Things' has just been posted. I would really appreciate any feedback at all and certainly any votes. I'm more than happy to exchange a read for a read too! :) Here's an extract - Enjoy!
Up until now her solution had been symptom management and not to cure the condition. But it seemed to be evolving more rapidly than she had seen before and they were running out of time. Once the meditations and medications stopped working entirely, he would not be the only person at the mercy of his condition. She'd never seen a situation like Noah's in all her years doing what she did. Maybe it was his sensitive and inviting nature, or maybe there was something darker in his background that he had buried too deeply for her to detect offhand. But she had run out of time stalling him, and she needed to do what he had been asking her to do since that first day on the beach. But what if I can't help him?
Em suddenly remembered the last thing her brother said to her the day she told him she wanted to move out on her own. "You can't live by yourself. What if you get hurt? What if you get lost? What if you can't make enough money to pay the rent? What if you can't find anyone to help you?" These were questions that had settled in the shadows around her mind and that whispered softly to her in her loneliest nights. They were also the questions that had pushed her out that door.
Em also remembered the last thing that she had said to her brother the day she told him she was moving. "'What ifs' don't exist, and I'm not going to waste my life in fear of things that don't exist." And she didn't.
I have posted the first part of Chapter 3 in 'Terrible Things'. Din't quite stick to my deadline but I'm working on that. Please give it a read and possibly a vote if you like it? :D
Made some changes to Chapter 2 of Terrible Things and Chapter 3 will be up this Friday. Getting into a good schedule now.
Chapter 2 of Terrible Things is complete and edited. I would really appreciate any votes and/or opinions. I'm hoping to enter this into a competition soon and any help I get will be rememebered. Thank you in advance! :D
So I've published the first 1,000 edited words of my second chapter on 'Terrible Things'. I would appreciate any reads and any feedback at all. The rest of chapter 2 will be up in the next couple of days. Excited to get back into writing this. :D
It's been a long time coming but the second chapter of my novel will soon be up here. I appreciate anyone who reads, votes, or comments on it. Any critique or opinions are welcomed with open arms! :)
Getting into my second chapter of my novel. Writing is F***ing hard. Remember that next time you get down about not being able to write. Writing is art, and making art is not easy.
Thanks for the follow. I very much appreciate it.
