ColbyBenoit8

I guess I'll be writing two stories at once so to anyone who is reading my current story, I'm sorry but the updates may take a little while.

HaleyBeyer3

Hey lady I added in some more to some of the chapters and added a new part

ColbyBenoit8

Of course, it's really good :)
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HaleyBeyer3

Thank you obviously a very rough draft so any feedback is apprrciated
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ColbyBenoit8

Yeah I read it, the extra background was helpful, and I really liked the new chapter. You did really well with the details and conveying the discomfort.
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