Crave4Death

@IronDragon19 I wanted to ask if you need an outfit/armor improvement for YN (My Adventures with Superman)?

Crave4Death

@ChainExpert-Chrono Also, thank you for that honest comment, I had thought my story had some flaws in need improvement. 
          
          I'm grateful that there are readers who still appreciate my work.

ChainExpert-Chrono

@Crave4Death You're welcome, you're actually the second best writer that wrote one of my favorite underrated Anime: Strike The Blood, below Unordinary Blood (Unordinary X OC) by KingAccel.
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Crave4Death

@IronDragon19 I want to ask, do you want the idea of having a deity for YN (Witcher) and to serve as a patron for Witchers (In Critical Role)?

Crave4Death

@IronDragon19 Alright, just wanted to give any random suggestions I've come across.
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IronDragon19

@Crave4Death i am not gonna add that in the story
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Crave4Death

@IronDragon19 Like Artagan the Traveler, Death starts off as a minor deity in a foreign world.
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Crave4Death

Hello, I've just re-update The Mysterious One's Path to Nowhere, which is now The Progenitor's Path to Nowhere.
          
          The reason I've changed my MC's power from V's to the 4th Progenitor's is because I feel as though... it's not enough.
          
          Also, I prefer to make my own characters hell of a strong. So please, try to comment on what you think of this improvement.