The Wattpad Critique

Hello I would like my story critiqued. It is not fully complete, but I can send what I have. Thank you.
          https://www.wattpad.com/myworks/289080302-circus-of-dreams

Almost forgot since the story that i send you was my first one it may have some bad writing in some chapters 

Hello, i was hoping if you could give a review of my story when you have some free time of course. I would appreciate that and thanks. Have a good day. 
          
          P.S, the story has mature language, and bloody scenes 
          
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/211512054?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=XxArcanusxX&wp_originator=8hBSuhKyAdLnWbScwdYwBR8%2Be%2F2ubIT8f8oJBvsCICOvaN5Zgh%2BXfSf0b58V8iyXP8BAG%2B8GrbRpmD%2FbJUzjZtrjcwl5hMhuS%2Fu%2BT7CoMg6XPbEVtRdfMigcRmHhAZTT

Hey, it would mean a lot to me if you check my story out. It's a Harmione fanfiction. 
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/254840784?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_writing&wp_page=create&wp_uname=TheMightyBookaholic&wp_originator=%2FsEJpFrcstv1qh9K3Alil9a6aAKT7kYVIsC4Qub9ePAHo5Xsl9Sa51p1ibpKgwdx%2FL4gxU0u2MxDsENBY0YT8LSlvcXxKBAqPEqUA0GZXuuxKVzTvmI2C3gaPZQffXV4

I would love for you to critique my work if possible! I'm new to Wattpad and have gotten positive responses from my readers
          https://www.wattpad.com/951137649-the-tale-of-jamie-devereaux-prologue

salut je suis intéressé par une critique de mon livre New Country New Beginning Merci 
          voici le lien
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/219495613-new-country-new-beginning
          merci d'avance pour tous les efforts fournis

Hi, I would like you to critique my WIP: Feeding Ground.
          
          Here is the story link:
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/214020631-feeding-ground
          
          I appreciate it; thank you for your time.

do you still critique books?

If i have toi say the same thing, Can you tell me your feeling?

Pouvez-vous lire et commenter la jeune nouvelle "un réveil surprenant" svp? Ne le dite pas, je suis sa mère. Elle publié ça première nouvelle.