An aspiring Author, Husband and Father of six children. I love to read and write scifi, and have completed first novel. Looking for criticism and advice on where to go from here to get published as I send out my query letters and finish synopsis.

Please let me know what you think of it here, will post more chapters as time and personal edits contue. I hope everyone enjoys, as I enjoy telling a good story... hope this IS a good one. But even if its a bad one, please let me know

Sincerely 
DC Vermillion

PS be sure to follow me on twitter @dc_vermillion and I usually follow back