@DaisyTales291
Sorry for being here author..
Give chance to my story sweeties,
I am sure you will like it.
Vote and comment and tell me
How is it??
https://www.wattpad.com/story/409084280?utm_medium=link&utm_source=android&utm_content=share_reading
Hey author
I just completed your story "his rani sa" i really liked it , it was nice.
Though i think you should have written more about nisha and Shivam as well , like how they fell in love with each other , their moments and how their life ended. , also veer and naira also didn't talk about them much ,like they meant nothing at all , like their death meant nothing.
I'm not criticizing or anything I am just saying what I feel would have been better.
Treat it."
Gauri let out a quiet, humorless laugh. "You really think I'll listen to you?"
"Mrs. Yashvardhan."
That was enough to make her pause.
Just for a second.
"I'm not your doctor," she said, her voice colder now, controlled, like she was forcing distance between them.
"Phir bhi ho."
Before she could step away, he pulled his shirt aside.
And just like that-
everything shifted.
Blood.
Too much of it.
Dark. Spreading. Wrong.
Not a scratch.
A gunshot.
Her breath caught, barely noticeable, but enough. The wound wasn't small, wasn't something that could wait. It demanded attention... whether she wanted to give it or not.
"You need a hospital," she said quickly, forcing her voice steady.
"Tum ho."
"I said no."
"Phir dekhna band karo."
That made her freeze.
Because he was right.
She was still looking.
Still calculating.
Still thinking like a doctor.
Her fingers curled slightly at her side.
"This is serious..." she muttered.
"Phir theek karo."
Silence stretched between them.
Heavy.
Unavoidable.
Her mind told her to walk away.
To leave.
To not get involved.
But her instincts had already made the decision.
"Don't move," she said finally, stepping closer despite everything in her resisting it.
A faint smirk touched his lips.
Because he knew-
she hadn't agreed.
She had just stopped refusing.
Hey dear
Sorry for posting here without permission…
I’m a new writer and I’ve recently started my story. I’ve put a lot of effort and emotions into it, and I genuinely hope readers give it a chance
If you enjoy drama, romance, and a bit of intensity… this might be for you
Please try it once, it would mean a lot
And if you like it, I’d love your feedback!
https://www.wattpad.com/story/391118241?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_writing&wp_page=create&wp_uname=ashh_write_s
I'm sorry author i posted it without your permission but this is my first book multi couple with different tropes of each I'd love if you and your readers consider it once
https://www.wattpad.com/story/406592242?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_writing&wp_page=create&wp_uname=Vforvaibs
Hiii sis, I just wanted to say tht I loved "His Rani Sa". It was my first indian story and goshh did it win my heart. Thanks for making such a sweet and wonderful story that kept me on the edge at all times. I really hope you make more wonderful stories for me to enjoy☺️☺️
guys its very disrespectful to another author for you all accusing me of copying someone's story which I don't even know exists how can i copy someone's work if this is my imagination I imagined this story and thought of serving it in front of people if u can't respect a particular author then please at least don't be disrespectful.
Less hooo guysssss tysmmm for 700+k reads on his rani sa and 2k+ reads on abhiveers story it means alot and we have almost completed 200 folowers