Hey author
I just completed your story "his rani sa" i really liked it , it was nice.
Though i think you should have written more about nisha and Shivam as well , like how they fell in love with each other , their moments and how their life ended. , also veer and naira also didn't talk about them much ,like they meant nothing at all , like their death meant nothing.
I'm not criticizing or anything I am just saying what I feel would have been better.