DajaMccullum6

zaniayah

          Hey love, 
          
          The way that I would go about it (you don’t have to take any of my suggestions, it is your work after all and you have to do what works for you) is having a complete character list and making sure that’s all out of the way before you dive into the rest of the book. 
          
          In terms of time skips you can used words such as “a few moments later” “ten minutes had passed” etc. This helps with the fluidity of words and helps readers understand more clearly. Another thing that I do before I publish is have someone look over what I wrote and ask for brutal honesty. Then I go over it again. 
          
          I originally meant to put it over here so you would see it. Let me know if you have any questions. 
          
          Zaniayah 

zaniayah

Hey love, 
          
          I just finished reading your story, and I have to say it has SO much potential. You’ve created an engaging world and characters that really stand out. With a bit of fine-tuning (i.e. cleaning up the content, sharpening the storyline, smoothing out the time jumps and POV switches, and polishing the grammar) it’s going to shine even brighter.
          
          I’m genuinely excited to see how you develop it further. I know it’s going to turn into something amazing, and I can’t wait to read what’s next!
          
          Keep going, you’ve got something special here! Maybe we can do collab someday! 
          
          Zaniayah ❤️

ViewsFromTheAuthor

Hey! I’m back and excited to share that my new book Crimson Legacy is out now! I’m rebuilding my audience and would truly appreciate it if you checked it out. It’s a twist-filled story in the works, and I think you’ll love it! PLEASE LEAVE COMMENTS 
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/161312294?utm_source=ios&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_writing&wp_page=create&wp_uname=ViewsFromTheAuthor

DajaMccullum6

Of course I will and did you like mine 
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fantabhris

thank you, for adding my books to your reading lists <3 <3 (you aren’t obligated to btw)
          
          welcome to wattpad (i guess? not sure if you’re just new to the app) feel free to change your avatar to your liking i feel like without any picture it makes you come off as a bot which you are not. sorry for rambling :( 
          lol, but I’ll be on here to support your works! im open to being mutuals. 
          
          - from Briunna 
          p.s. i wish you nothing but success and growth on your author/writing journey. good luck and don’t be too hard on yourself. (> v <)

DajaMccullum6

I appreciate that a lot and I add the picture rn also same too you ❤️❤️
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