Dang0heart254

Jumps with joy
          	Spring break is here

Dang0heart254

@snowstorm_train haha loser /nsrs /lh /silly
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snowstorm_train

@Dang0heart254 LUCKY
          	  
          	  I have to wait until April
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snowstorm_train

You have ONE new message:
          
          OI. YOU HAVE TWO CHAPTERS TO GRACE WITH YOUR GOOFY COMMENTS (yes I posted one today shush)

Dang0heart254

@snowstorm_train I wish I could get these as actual notifs
            
            Skittering over
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Dang0heart254

Jumps with joy
          Spring break is here

Dang0heart254

@snowstorm_train haha loser /nsrs /lh /silly
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snowstorm_train

@Dang0heart254 LUCKY
            
            I have to wait until April
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snowstorm_train

Hi
          
          I'm going around asking those who've read PFMN for as intense of a hyper analysis of it so far OR just your general thoughts on characters/plot/where we're going next
          
          
          
          
          Please give me something I love hearing you yap + I wanna know people's thoughts on my work eikfoqjd

Dang0heart254

@snowstorm_train teehee
            
            Excellent use of free will
            
            Absolutely; you’re doing good with that
            My main criticism in that regard is it feels a tad on the nose, but that’s more a craft issue that will fix with time and practice
            
            Russia might have to sit tight a while longer
            Im getting frozen yogurt for him
            
            I have I was just saying so ;-;
            
            American politics aside, you still favor the USSR because of the left lean, not because of any hypothetical smaller Geneva suggestions violation count, yk (btw if this comes off as aggressive I swear it’s not meant to be. I just know when I start panicking over a conflict I start dropping a weirdly large amount of tone tags for some reason. There is no conflict and I’m not trying to start one)
            
            I never said it couldn’t
            I’m just saying it’s a classic, esp for the story premise and being a teen writer
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snowstorm_train

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@Dang0heart254 yeah, I mean that's fair (what author doesn't do that, hmmmMMMMMMM?)
            
            Ye, because I can
            
            Also because this country has so many issues that it's like... I feel like I'm shouting into the void when I talk about them so like time to write out a story that's taking it to the extreme which is weirdly not far from reality (because as an iteration of what Mark Twain said: Why shouldn’t truth be stranger than fiction? Fiction, after all, has to make sense.)
            
            Russia being in the hospital is indeed an issue and impedes on impact towards Uzbekistan yes. 
            
            How have you not noticed that this is more so modern day :sob: (anyway)
            
            Ehhh, not really. If that were true, Third Reich would be more of a better person and Soviet would be exceptional. But they aren't, because Reich has committed every war crime under the sun (in my perception of him) and Soviet is an idiot with unresolved issues. 
            
            That may be true, but the issue here is difference in ideology ig. America and TR are both right-leaning, whereas Soviet Union is more left-leaning. Ig it's an issue of perception because ik that the USSR did bad shit, but how would that apply to narrative? Maybe later on when shit hits the fan, but we're not there yet, ya?
            
            Also aren't most revolutions an "underdogs rise up with the help of the military" kind of story? Why can't a story with elements of global issues include that?
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Dang0heart254

@snowstorm_train greetings, vole from the depths of the November of 1867
            
            I think you as an author are absolutely projecting ur personal frustrations and also creating an underdogs rise up kind of story
            Don’t get me wrong this in no way means it’s not peak
            It’s just smth I’ve noticed
            You especially focus on places you/your friends are from and places that have been colonized/invaded by the US or western powers
            Uzbekistan especially is interesting, even if she hasn’t gotten much screen time
            In the modern day, she has absolutely faced the American threat by geographical location alone
            However, historically (and in modern times even) Russia has also posed a significant threat, and yet you don’t focus on that as much (my irl Uzbek friend’s parents fled from there because of the Russian threat, and yet Uzbekistan and Russia seem to be friendly here. It’s Countryhumans so oversights/omissions are common and normal but your story errs on the side of being based off historical reality)
            Granted Russia is hospitalized as per my last read chapter so idk what bro would be doing while thugging it out
            But it is a thing I’ve noticed
            You tend to favor opponents of America in your story because they’re American opponents, rather than other reasons, though other reasons are certainly present
            The USSR, historically, has committed just as many atrocities as TR, America, any major power
            And yet in this
            Bro is retired, unaware his boyfriend is gonna marry him, and in need of a nap
            So ig this circles back to the top of this yap
            
            In this sufficient :>
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Dang0heart254

So I was reading a thing in the bathroom today and it was meant to be scary but it wasn’t to me
          
          Up until the toilet in the next stall flushed
          Then it felt ominous

Zephyrixx

@Dang0heart254 | Something is going to happen
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snowstorm_train

you now have 1 unread PFMN chapter (just released)
          
          RUSSIA IS TARNS RUSSIA IS TRAANANNSNSS

snowstorm_train

oi
          
          
          you should totally read The Dynasty Must Fall (book 1 is Horizon's End) or We Are All But Fish
          
          no pressure tho

Dang0heart254

@snowstorm_train oooooooooooo
            
            I’ll check it out sometime
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Dang0heart254

It’s international women’s day
          
          Be nice to any woman you see today
          
          But more than that
          
          Be nice to people
          
          Every day 
          
          Regardless of what gender they are