DarthTimor

Just editing the mistakes and trying to make things more clear.

JutZoak9

I wanted to leave a note here as well. Thanks for all of your comments on Demi-Human. Besides the entertaining dialogue you've created, I also appreciate that you understand. Makes the work worth it. :)

DarthTimor

No problem I was looking for a good story like this to read for a while now, so it was refreshing to find yours.
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