Dead_Branch

Hey everyone I released the second chapter to deep dreams and chapter 3 is already being worked on. Sorry if it's been taking some time. I hope you all enjoy the new chapter. 

hjyi04

Hi! I have particular R4R style but it's totally up to you because I'm not sure how well received my comments would be. I kind of list my comments throughout the chapter with both critiques (but you can definitely take it however you will because it's your story) and compliments. If you don't want the critique's then you can let me know and I'll delete them. Thanks!

Dead_Branch

@hjyi04 hey it's up to you and how comfortable you feel I will appreciate any feedback to just talking about stories. If I'm ever confused or anything I'll ask questions and answer any questions too. 
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