DevilMoon

@chempier Thank you. I will try to clear the book. Please, if I can ask you for one more thing- can you write me a PM(private message) so I can ask you for some ideas for the POVs. Thank you again :)

chempier

Hey, so as I was reading your book, I realized that I have no idea what is going on. I think the problem is that you have so many povs. So, just a suggestion limit your points of views, it may clear everything up, also each part is a little confusing like in your description with in the chapter. I know i sound really mean and I don't mean to, I know I need improve as well, its just kindly advise.