Dhthunder

Ok I read your story and I actually really liked it! The only thing I noticed was how you said the blinding sunlight almost blinded me :) but other than that it's really good so far!!

Deep4141

Hi, I have uploaded the prologue and the first chapter of my story "Die Another Death: The Underworld relocated.........right into my town !!!" I would very much like it if u could read it and comment on it.Feel free to criticize, point out typos and so on. If u like it, maybe u could vote for it and become a fan. ;-) :)) I will return the favour for ur works. Thanks in advance !!! Here's the link to my story - http://www.wattpad.com/468645-the-underworld-relocated-right-into-my-town