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Dhthunder
Jun 28, 2010 09:59AM
Ok I read your story and I actually really liked it! The only thing I noticed was how you said the blinding sunlight almost blinded me :) but other than that it's really good so far!!View all Conversations
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Onawereian: World of Slaves
In a world where your only hope is running away, Lyla stands out. She wants to run away, but her disappearanc...