Dio167208

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Yooooo everyone what's good my people, so this is out of nowhere however I have a favor to ask of you all, my girlfriend is wanting to get into writing books and wasn't too confident about her work. However she is wanting to try her best and we'll, I would be an asshole if I didn't try and help a little as someone who's been doing this for four freaking years now. So if you all could give some help, read her new work, and overall give tips for improvement (in a nice way not a harmful way) that would be appreciated.
          	
          	Thanks for listening my homies.
          	
          	DIO OUT!!!!!!!
          	https://www.wattpad.com/story/371793246

darkkkkkcc

@dio167208 I'm kinda confused about celestial gods or celestial concepts in king in darkness story can you explain them to me PS thanks for answering my SCP and hp Lovecraft question
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Dio167208

@lin_starsnight don't, just don't, This might be overreacting on my part but I do not enjoy jokes like that towards my loved ones, I'm fine when it's at me, but I don't want her to get the wrong idea. (I hope you understand) Also @darkkkkkkkkkkk2 thank you
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darkkkkkkkkkkk2

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@Dio167208 say fucken less
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darkkkkkcc

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hey I have a question you know alot of SCP so do you what is the scarlet king like he some stuff here and their but what exactly is he you said he is not a god but he is a just a op son of a bitch but though he is like a elder god or eldritch god but also how powerful is and how did get so strong  to be able to kill authors and  can destroy tired platonic comporeal fundamental narrative concepts eternalisms and you said he is also not a omnipotent being

darkkkkkcc

hey I was wondering if azathoth does infact dream all of creation how does that work exactly like if wakes up poof all of creation is gone but also does that mean he dreams up everything powers,dimensions,gods,concepts basically everything does that mean he could more powerful than anyone because everything is just his dream so by that concept he should be more than powerful than anyone in it because all of creation is just his dream right so by that logic no powers or laws stuff like that can't stop him right because he is the source to everything right

darkkkkkcc

I have a question if you are able to make a story somewhat similar to eldritch truth and the main character is able to transcend azathoth dream and beyond it and make some what balance not like right off the bat the main character is strong but he work his way up to godhood how would you do it just wondering

darkkkkkcc

Oh it all right a least you answered me 
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Dio167208

@darkkkkkcc I don't think that's even possible 
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darkkkkkcc

can you explain oryx Truth to lies ability I kind still don't get it

Dio167208

@darkkkkkcc basically view it as this, "Truth" in the context of the story is anything that's deemed to be present within outside or beyond the Omniverse. Basically he's viewing at as an Author would and can just choose to turn this "truth" this things exsitence into a lie, by doing so it erases all things connected to it, and practically cuts everything out.
            
            Meaning Oryx is just the Author able to say what is, or isn't "true"
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pausevlim

New idea. [Eye of the Beholder]. In which a soul of a dead man waits in the void for an eternity, going insane and eventually losing most of his emotions to cope with the isolation, makes contact with an ancient being born of the void. A deal was offered. Reincarnation, at the cost of this being living inside of the man’s body and soul. In response, the man stated plainly: “I refuse.” A new deal was struck, this time by the man. Reincarnation, at the cost of his left eye; which the ancient being would then inhabit, and the sharing of his five senses. For some reason, perhaps out of curiosity, it agreed. Leading to the birth of Vergil Belial, younger cousin of Diehauser Belial. Who, at the time of his birth, was born without a single ounce of demonic energy. He lacked even the bat wings. This is, in truth, because of the ancient being’s powers that now are possessed by Vergil: Void Energy, now classified as a mutation of the [Worthless], that can  nullify anything and everything it touches. Know that Vergil’s left eye has never been opened since birth. He can’t use demonic energy. But can use his own energy to eventually teleport and things like that. He uses a katana, focusing on the Iai swordsmanship school. And he’s into poetry and literature. He may or may not have a peerage, depending on how I make Void Energy interact with Evil Pieces. And that’s all I have so far.

Dio167208

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@pausevlim fuck yes, I love seen's like these because you know their about to go beast mode
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pausevlim

@Dio167208 Here’s a little something that could happen in this story.
            
            
            “Welcome, everybody, to the event we’ve all been waiting for! Yes, the time has arrived for the rating game between Rias Gremory and the rising star of the Underworld, Vergil Belial!”
            
            The two peerages appeared on opposites sides of the arena; a city. This would be a team death match type of rating game. But it wouldn’t go how anyone expected.
            
            “Wait! What’s this?! Every single member of Belial’s peerage has retired, not even two seconds into the match!”
            
            A cold sneer appeared on “Nihilism’s” face. 
            
            He would fight them all, all by himself. 
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Dio167208

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@pausevlim That sounds extraordinarily freaking interesting and honestly you can probably have it replace the demonic energy within the evil pieces for void energy, void pieces anybody? Like imagine having an entire squad who can all pull up teleport and do a bunch of crazy stuff like that like it would make for some insanely over the top DMC 5 level shit You could write without any hassle. And overall it's a very good take on this kind of story I genuinely want to see where this goes
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darkkkkkcc

Hey have question what’s is celestial god or celestial concept in king of darkness story because I’m so confused ps thank for answering my Scp and hp lovecraft question and taken the time of your day answer my question 

Dio167208

@darkkkkkcc they where the highest Teir gods that existed before the arrival of the court and Oryx.
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pausevlim

New idea. [The Knight of Conquest]. In the age of Camelot, a new legend is born. Long before the assembly of the Knights of the Round Table, a man traversed those British lands. Helping villages big and small, and fighting bandits and would be warlords. He was a hero of the people, known for fighting with his bare hands. However, while he did enjoy helping people, he wasn’t doing it for them. No, Andrew did it for the thrill of the fight. The joy of conquest. And that’s what lead him to join King Arthur’s army when the Lion King declared war on King Vortigern. It was in that battle that he proved himself to Arthur, and became a Knight of the Round Table. Among them, he was the one that King Arthur used to cull any and all enemies to their kingdom. From the Saxons to the Romans, Sir Andrew slaughtered them all. Becoming known, then, as a Knight that uses the weapons of his enemies. It was also during that time that he met the witch Morgana, but that’s a different tale. As a Servant, he possesses the Noble Phantasm [Knight of Conquest], that can steal any Noble Phantasm of lower rank, and the personal skill [Protection of the Witch], that can negate any and all curses that affect him. His noble phantasm is EX rank.

Dio167208

@pausevlim You know what I can absolutely see that He has no loyalty He is just a being of chaos
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pausevlim

@Dio167208 I haven’t decided. In the end, he’s probably the least loyal out of all the Knights of the Round Table. And his trysts with Morgan to factor in, I can see something like this happening…
            
            “Old man!”
            
            In the hallway leading to Sir Andrew’s quarters, a young, rebellious voice called out to him. He half turned to face the red knight, his face the picture of boredom.
            
            “What?”
            
            Undisturbed by his lack of enthusiasm, Mordred grinned under her helmet. And for some reason, Andrew found himself getting excited for the first time in years.
            
            Thus, the rebellion began. With Sir Andrew as Mordred’s right hand man. After all, he’s a battle maniac at his core.
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Dio167208

@pausevlim that, oh ya, that's a sick idea. What would be his involvement in the call of Camelot then? I assume that he just battles all that opposed the king or is their something else?
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pausevlim

I have an idea. What if a reincarnation had the ability to create Gobblegum from Black Ops 3? This would take place in Jujutsu Kaisen, with this power being the MC’s Cursed Technique. By killing Cursed Spirits, he can turn them into Liquid Divinium that he can store. That LD can then be transformed into Gobblegum. However, do to a binding vow, he can only consume a random Gobblegum every thirty minutes. With extra cursed energy being expended if he tries to summon more for consumption. In all, this is a very low cost technique if used correctly. Allowing the user to focus everything on physical strengthening. Gobblegum like Perkaholic and On The House have time limits as well but can be summoned again depending on luck. The user can select a specific set of Gobblegum to be summoned from. And anything that comes out of [The Box] is permanent. That being said, combining gobblegums is allowed at the cost of extra CE. For example: Immulation Liquidation(Summons [The Box]) can be used alongside Respin Cycle(Respins [The Box]), and then Crate Power(Pack-A-Punches weapon that comes from [The Box]) to create a ultra deadly weapon of mass destruction. That’s not even getting into combat Gobblegums that can be stacked. 

pausevlim

@Dio167208 “Domain Expansion: Dr Monty’s Factory!!!” It’s a domain that doesn’t have a sure hit effect. Instead, it grants access to all of the Gobblegum the MC has created. Negating the cost of summoning and allowing for some brutal combinations. 
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Dio167208

@pausevlim it sounds really freaking good and we'll thought out homie, but with this curse technique what would you say it's domain expansion it's tied too would be like? A Cod zombie map perhaps?
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darkkkkkcc

I have a question you know more lore of SCP and hp Lovecraft who do you think would win PS thank you for answering my questions You're a real homie

Dio167208

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@darkkkkkcc No problem, Now as for this question well I'm going to be flat out honest with how f****** insanely over the top SCP has become over the course of time I honestly have no idea. Like for instance 2747 Sam and the Scarlet King (the Chinese version or whatever the hell the most broken version of him is nowadays) are just way too freaking high. They're able to actually kill authors and flat out just all controlled delete and tired platonic comporeal fundamental narrative concepts eternalisms all that shit. 
            
            But because of the modern renditions of HP Lovecraft if they live within the same universe they would be a part of the dream, But then again there's also Sam who can just infinitely transcend narratives who can be above even his own creator So you can make an argument that he can just go above Azathoth. Or 2747 can just eat their narratives. 
            
            Honestly in this kind of debate it literally just dictates on what do you want to happen. Do you want them to have to follow the fundamentals of the dream? Then HP Lovecraft wins, because That would mean they are all fictional and nyarlathotep, Yog-sothoth and Azathoth What absolutely cook them. Since one; nyarlathotep is real (He has struck azathoth) Yog-sothoth Is it literally all of them combined. And Azathoth literally made them. 
            
            However if they can go above it well then SCP wins Because they have way more hacks and abilities than HP Lovecraft does. 
            
            It just depends on on what fundamentals you're following.
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darkkkkkcc

hey i have a question is it true that azathoth dreams all creation or is it just the fandom that put that there and also if  he does't  dream of all creation how his so powerful because does't just sleep and do nothing else

Dio167208

@darkkkkkcc to be quite frank there are two ways to look at this, number one if you go off of the original works of HP Lovecraft himself No he doesn't dream all of reality. However my second point. HP Lovecraft also made all of his works into the public domain which means the public can do whatever the hell they want with them, collectively the people have agreed and came to the understanding and creation that Azathoth can 100% in fact dream all of reality. 
            
            If you want to go with the original HP Lovecraft design he cannot, Yog-sothoth is the one that is the most powerful, however with modern renditions by countless authors and also people who work on the HP Lovecraft genre They agree that he can in fact create reality by dreaming it.
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