Dreamyshelf25

Hey! Checkout my story if you have time. Thank you

Loobbiii

One more thing I want to  tell author. I noticed that you have followed half of author Livizlv's followers. To gain followers, you shouldn't follow them, author. Because some of her followers are Sri Lankan and Especially her fans. For a person like her she has a wide fan base ( like us ). So following her followers won't give you fans, author. If people genuinely like your story they would follow you! 
          
          I am a fellow fan of yours! 
          Love you author!!!
          
          ( I am sorry if I sound rude... )

Dreamyshelf25

@Loobbiii Hey! i can understand what you said but my intention wasn't gaining followers, i just want to follow some people, that's all, and i don't pay attention to my followers at all, like you said if they like my story they will vote and enjoy it. even for my stories i don't have any expectations, i just want people to read it, that's all. if my action troubled you then i'm sorry, anyways  thank you for following me. i hope my stories satisfy you, i don't think author Livizlv would mind it as she's a friend of me.
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Loobbiii

You are gonna be my second favorite author, ( first is reserved for author Liv sorry hehe  )
          
          The character Ashley is well written, not like most of the characters, she is strong and brave. And Especially stands up for her herself. That's the main character energy. I honestly like her and Jennie a lot. I am eagerly waiting for her story. Kevin is well written too! Not in a perfect way. But in a imperfect beautiful way.

Dreamyshelf25

@Loobbiii Thank you for sharing your thoughts, and i geniunely think author Livizlv deserved to be the first, [ infact, she's my fav too], i apperiate that you understood the characters. Thank you again, your comment was kinda motivating me!
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Loobbiii

Hello Author.
          I read your second chance story and it was really good, for a first time writer you are very good but after 14 chapter I noticed that the story is not flowing naturally... At first it was just like Ashley. But after the 14 chapter it looks like an AI generated writing. Like it's more IMPROVED.
          
          I just want to tell you this author, everyone is not good at anything, by time they will eventually get better. When you start to write more stories, you will improve but please don't use AI to help.
          
          I am not bragging or something but Author @Livizlv ( your friend I guess ) she wasn't perfect at first either but now she has gotten used to it and it's perfect now. You will also improve and be perfect. 
          
          Please use your own words and write, Author. 
          
          Thank you,
          Your fellow reader❤️✨!!!

Dreamyshelf25

@Loobbiii Hello, First thank you for your advice and sharing your thoughts. I'm sure that i don't use any AI for my writing, but it's totally understandable that you felt it that way because i've taking some lessons on writing and i'm improving my language, [ i did use AI to find some words and their meanings, but i didn't let it write the the story], well infact that isn't my goal right, i want to write a story then it should be my words and writing, there's no use in it if i use AI. I can totally understand what you said, thanks for sharing your thoughts,
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Loobbiii

When are you going to upload for Pretend to love story?

Loobbiii

@Dreamyshelf25 oh okay...but I am just waiting for the second series.
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Dreamyshelf25

@Loobbiii I'll upload it as soon as a finish my first book, since it's a series. You can try reading my first book if you are interested.
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