Dxxxxxxxxxx123

Guys, I had an idea for a new ff today but I need you for that. Do you think the role of a king or a pawn/servant suits Harry or Louis more? Thanks to everyone who is taking part and I wish you a nice day love shadow

enrico_stiloso69

tbh i think harry servant 
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Atlanta1619

@ Dorisandmoss123  I agree! 
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luna-_-

Hey!
          I wanted to ask u sth
          I have started reading Your story "fangs and roses". however Iam a little confused about the chapters story line. Can u help me understand please? Like in one chapter the scene is short but descriptive but next chapter is the same scene before but brief and descriptive soo just a little confused with that. Besides that I love your writing style soo much!!! So poetic and deep tbh luv that. 
          Kind regards 
          ~F

luna-_-

@luna-_- AHH okay okay
            Thank you, got it
            
            Doing a great job with English, not being your first language!! 
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Dxxxxxxxxxx123

@luna-_- Yes, I can. English isn't my first language, so sometimes I write two versions of a chapter, just to have two versions. Sometimes one version emphasizes different feelings than another scene, and I like to recap what happened before. That's why some chapters repeat or are similar, since I always forget what happened before when I read. I hope you understand, and thank you.
            
            Love, Shadow
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Dxxxxxxxxxx123

Guys, I had an idea for a new ff today but I need you for that. Do you think the role of a king or a pawn/servant suits Harry or Louis more? Thanks to everyone who is taking part and I wish you a nice day love shadow

enrico_stiloso69

tbh i think harry servant 
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Atlanta1619

@ Dorisandmoss123  I agree! 
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Monica379937

Sorry to hear that your stories are questioned. If the person wants to read your stories they should with an open heart and be greatful someone is writing great stories. You shouldn’t have to explain yourself. Treat people with kindness people!
          Ok rant over just wanted to say thank you for keeping the fandom going. Also the new story my brothers friend I can’t seem to open it.
          Take care and thank you from a loyal follower.

Monica379937

No problem  take care and continue doing what you love doing. Thanks again :))
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Dxxxxxxxxxx123

@Monica379937 
            Thank you so much for your kind words! And to answer your question, yes, the story isn't published or finished yet. I'm still working on it and accidentally hit the publish button on one of the chapters. But rest assured, the story will be coming soon, and there will be lots of love, hopefully! 
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Dxxxxxxxxxx123

Good morning guys, I hope you're all doing well. I wanted to clarify something here because I've received several messages saying my stories are written with AI. I categorically deny this. I use translation apps because English isn't my first language. Another reason why so many stories are  written is partly because I write after work, during breaks, and at nursing school, but also because I have a real problem with not being able to leave stories unfinished. Therefore, I have to finish writing even when it's 4 a.m. But there's more: before I was supposed to start my training, I was on sick leave for about six months, which involved several hospital visits. So I had quite a lot of free time. I want to make it absolutely clear that I'm not targeting anyone in particular, and I don't mean any harm to anyone. I simply write because it's fun and relaxing for me.

Dxxxxxxxxxx123

@Zaynlover4ever1 
            
            Thank you, and here's a tip I can give you as someone who's been doing this for a year: it will be completely different than you imagined. You learn all sorts of things at nursing school, but not really the things you need. But I think it's great that you want to do it. Love, Shadow
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Zaynlover4ever1

@Dxxxxxxxxxx123 I am sorry you're being accused of this :( I just found your profile and I am looking forward to reading your stories. It's so cool you're in nursing school. I am actually taking prerquisites for nursing school right. now.
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Dxxxxxxxxxx123

No one should feel attacked here. Writing  is something I enjoy and it's my hobby. I love to write. And of course, I'm not a professional author. Many of my stories contain plot holes and much else, but I enjoy writing. And that's precisely why it's important to me to say this. I wish you all a wonderful day. TPWK AND  Do IT IN THE TOMMO WAY
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helpmelou

In sorry for asking, and I really don't wanna seem rude, but the way your stories are written seems like AI. The dashes are kind of unusual in normal writing but are used very commonly in AI writing, and you use them a lot. Your words also often circle, and sometimes you bring up the same point or situation up multiple times. There are also no mistakes in your writing. Not a single punctuation error, not one mispelling, not one accidental lower case, nothing. Its oddly too perfect and essay like.
          
          Also, in your bio, you mention that ur training to be a nurse and stuff, which is awesome and really cool, but it's hard to believe that you would have enough time of day to post as many chapters or stories that you do. No one is able to write 85 stories in 2 years, unless you're working day and night, which I don't find possible with your job.
          
          Again, I'm not trying to be rude or anything, but if it is AI, I encourage you to write stuff by your own. AI is slowly ruining our planet, and it's not ok to use it daily or to use it excessively. Your pfp is also AI, so I kindly suggest to find a real picture of the two or find a manip or something that's not AI. If your stories are AI, please either take them down or don't post. 
          
          People want stories that are different, that takes time, and shows creativity. Using AI is the exact opposite.

idk___why

@ helpmelou  at one point I saw that there were a few sentences that sounded like an ai program (a bit like ''yeah of course I'm gonna write you your request") so yeah I sadly think the stories might be ai 
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Dxxxxxxxxxx123

@Dxxxxxxxxxx123 I work 8 hours a day, but I'm in Germany, which is different than in England, etc. And since I only work the early shift, I have time there.
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Dxxxxxxxxxx123

@helpmelou 
            It's okay, but please let me clarify something: English isn't my first language, so I use translation apps when I get stuck. Also, much of the story is scripted because I wrote it myself before I created this account. I assure you, I don't write with AI; I simply use translation apps.
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kindaeh

Do you have another account on A03 or something? I've noticed you've posted almost 100 stories in less than a year, and most of them very recently 

Dxxxxxxxxxx123

@kindaeh 
            
            No, I don't have one. Or rather, not an AO3 account. The reason so many of my stories are online is that most of them are already pre-written.
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DisneyQueen0625

Hi,
          
          I’ve read a couple of your books and they’re really good!  You’re a very talented writer!
          
          Can I make a request?  Harry and Niall are twins who live in a very abusive household with their father where they’re never allowed to leave.  During one beating when they’re 10, their dad leaves a door open and Niall pushes Harry out of the way, telling Harry to run which he does.  Harry does plan to go back to get Niall, but he gets found by the police and child protective services and is bounced around to different foster homes, always running away to try to find Niall for five years.  No one believes he has a brother.  All he knows is what the house looks like.  When he’s 15, he’s given to Liam and Zayn as an emergency foster placement.  Louis is their son who was a foster kid before they adopted him.  Harry tries to run away there to find Niall, but Liam and Zayn are the first people to actually follow him and not send police to find him.  Harry ends up telling Liam and Zayn about Niall and Zayn, who’s a private investigator, decides to look into it himself.  Zayn eventually finds the house and decides to get Niall out of there himself.
          
          I’m sorry this is a long request, but I am interested to possibly see your take on it if you can.  Again, I love your stories!

music_lover_001

Hi,
          
          I just read one of your books and it was really good!  I love a good 1D family story.  I do plan to read more of your stories when I'm able to.
          
          If you can, can you maybe do a Ziam family story where Harry and Niall are brothers and their mother dies after giving birth to Harry?  Their father blames Harry and becomes abusive, but Niall tries to take all the hits for Harry.  When Harry is 4 and Niall is 8, their father kicks them out and they live on their own until Harry is 11 and Niall is 15, barely surviving with Niall being very protective of Harry.  Niall ends up getting sick and Harry tries to steal some medicine at the hospital and is discovered by either Liam or Zayn, who works there.  Harry leads them to Niall and it turns out Niall has a bad case of pneumonia.  Liam and Zayn end up deciding to take the two boys in.  Liam and Zayn also have Louis who is also a teenager, but they adopted him when he was a baby, so he doesn't really understand how bad some kids' situations are.
          
          Again, if you can.  I'm sorry this is long, but I would love to see how you write them adapting to the situation.  Again, you are such a good writer!

Dxxxxxxxxxx123

@music_lover_001 Thanks I'm happy your liked it
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music_lover_001

@Dxxxxxxxxxx123 It was a great story!  Thank you!
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Dxxxxxxxxxx123

@music_lover_001 
            
            I'm currently writing the story. It's become a bit darker; I hope that's okay and that the story is as you imagined it.
            
             Love, Shadow
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