LuciferXerxes

To all my 4 followers, I have this message.
          I love all of you. You are some of my best friends. No matter what you all tried to be there for me. That means something. That means that my pain wasn't felt alone. I truly care for all of you. No matter what, long after I'm dead and gone, I want you to know that I died knowing I had friends like you, and at Haven, and in steam, and in real life. I hope that means something to you guys.

Hey Guys, a question. First, the story I currently have started, I don't like how I did it. Originally it was meant for a website called Anonquest.com, where the viewers would vote on what the MC does. Because of this when I moved to make a version on here, I did not do any planning for the main character. I think I want to restart it, and discontinue the current version. 
          I would like tips from you guys -cough Gabi cough- on how I should do it this time around.
          
          Also, I'm going to start another story based in the S.T.A.L.K.E.R universe. I will put up the Wikipedia link for it at the end of this message, in case anyone wants to know what the hell STALKER is. This story is actually based on a RP I was going to do awhile back, and if any of you like STALKER, or get interested in it, you might find it pretty cool. And since I'm only making some things up, it makes it easier to focus on the actual story.
          
          I hope the tree of you following me say something, and maybe get me some extra help from your friends. Thanks guys for reading this.
          http://stalker.wikia.com/wiki/Main_Page

Can I get some feedback on my F:NW story i've started?

I started my Fallout fanfiction, this version written entirely on my own. Please tell me how it is as a start!

Hey Luci :D