EatMe7

Okay. So from what I have written, tell me what you think? Tell me things that need to be changed? Asked me a question? I will try and update thinks every day depending on what they are.  If you are just someone who has nothing nice to say to me or anyone in this whole wide world...tell me everything you want.(I'll allow profanity)

EatMe7

Thank you so much for the feedback. It's true most of the emotions or feelings displayed in the stories I write I have felt strongly in my life at one point. It's nice to know that experience does help when you write a story. :)
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Pandiisgae

@EatMe7 I think your writing is very good! IA think experience will make you a better writer, either from something you have already experienced, or something you feel relates to you. I find when I do that, my writing doesn't suck as much. I know I'm not the best writer, but these are hopefully some helpful tips!
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EatMe7

Okay. So from what I have written, tell me what you think? Tell me things that need to be changed? Asked me a question? I will try and update thinks every day depending on what they are.  If you are just someone who has nothing nice to say to me or anyone in this whole wide world...tell me everything you want.(I'll allow profanity)

EatMe7

Thank you so much for the feedback. It's true most of the emotions or feelings displayed in the stories I write I have felt strongly in my life at one point. It's nice to know that experience does help when you write a story. :)
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Pandiisgae

@EatMe7 I think your writing is very good! IA think experience will make you a better writer, either from something you have already experienced, or something you feel relates to you. I find when I do that, my writing doesn't suck as much. I know I'm not the best writer, but these are hopefully some helpful tips!
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