Egle Radziute

HELLO THERE! I'm not very sure, but I'm quite certain that you used to read my story "The Pink Notebook" that I had published in 2013. I just wanted to inform you personally that I have recently unpublished that story and rewrote it with the same name, cover, plot, and characters. Except the difference with this story is the way I approach it. If you are still interested in my story, feel free to check it out on my profile! Do drop votes and comments at parts that you like too! Your support would be very much appreciated and loved! <3 
          I plan to post daily, straight after completing my chapters! Though I'm currently on a small writing hiatus due to my examinations this week! But have no fear! I'd get on to it as soon as I can!
          xoxo Kim <3

look at my books at mcfluberbuger

Hello, everyone. If You want me to criticize Your books please write me a PM, because I don't really look at my profile page that often and I don't notice Your requests :)
          
          Thank You :)

if you could critique my book that would be awesome, either the prologue or chapter nine, or as much as you want
          http://www.wattpad.com/story/2014983-the-earthbound-chronicles-book-one-the-coming thanks in advance

please critique my book its uh my only one so ya please im new and want to get discovered!

Could you critique my book "Dreams"? It'd be very helpful!

Hello, i've been on wattpad for a while but this is my first story on here, i really don't know to think of it but i tried out a first chapter (and a second as well but thats not edited) I would really appreciate it if you could critique it and help me out on what i should improve on. I dunno, i've written the first two chapters and i don't even know if it looks good or not, haha.All advice and feedback would be appreciated! Thank you
          http://www.wattpad.com/story/6489963-be-not-easy
          thanks

http://www.wattpad.com/story/6872171-first-sight 
          Some help maybe? :)

Hey, I was wondering if you could critique my story...
          It's called "saved by the angel or Devil" 

Hello, I saw you're post and I could really use your assistance with the following:
          Is there any grammatical errors?
          Spelling mishaps?
          The colloquial style of writing that I use?
          Are the details to mundane and tedious?
          Does the book lack substance?
          Is it not engaging or entice to the reader to the extent they get disinterested?
          What should I change to make the book more appealing or attractive to readers?
          
          The Novel is called "My dear Camilla".
          
          You can be brutally honest.