Expertdeer

Heyy man,
          I hope you are doing fine. Its been long since I’ve heard from you either on my story or in my dms. Are you alright is everything fine ?

Expertdeer

@EgoistFazluu oh yes my bad. 
            Thanks for commenting btw you did great. Honestly I really appreciate your help. Btw if you really are ok to improve then I am doing some modifications. If you dont mind to these are the following-:
            
            1. You have to like do min of 20 comments
            2. You have to spend 40-50 minutes on a new chapter (now i know its not humanly possible but the idea is that after you read it in like 20 minutes or so you just have to keep it open scrool up and down and like keep a part open, then scrool to next para like this so in this way 40 mins would be complete)
            
            If you are fine with them then its alr. Also, one more thing the comments have to be done wihtin 5 hrs of upload and i would upload mostly on friday evening around 8 pm ist.
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EgoistFazluu

@Expertdeer no it's not like that it's just because of work 
            I saw your book noti and tried to do as many comments I can do on your latest and tell me if I need to improve comments or anything else there's no reason for me to ignore your msg or anything 
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JoshuaJacobson683

hey i just posted chapter 12 of my fanfic, just so i let you know

JoshuaJacobson683

@EgoistFazluu yeah i got the idea from transformers: beast machines, where rattrap and botanica were having an argument and they ended up kissing
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EgoistFazluu

@JoshuaJacobson683 I read it and it was good , just didn't expect misty and gary kissing
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