ElementalAce
It's been almost a week and the previous notification I sent out got exactly 0 replies, and I am now thoroughly confused as to why I have any followers at all since none of you seem particularly interested in either of my stories.
ElementalAce
ElementalAce
So I've noticed that I've gotten a few new followers recently, even though I've kinda stopped using Wattpad, aside from the community. I currently have two stories going, and I'd like to know which one you guys like more, so that I can continue it. If you guys, gals, and nonbinary pals could please reply to this and let me know it'd be a big help. Thank you!
AmarlynOak
Hi ElementalAce, I am really enjoying your story, and I can’t wait to see where it goes! I am new to writing superhero stories and I was wondering if you could check mine out and give me some feedback. It’s called ‘The Adventures of Cosmic Girl: Vol. One’
ElementalAce
@AmarlynOak I just read your story, and it seems really good so far. A few things I noticed though, are that the main character's name changes from Wendy(in part 1) to Betty(in part 2), there's a time jump from 8 years to teenager that might be explained to the reader in a different way, everyone seemed to know how to read sign language, and in part one you said Wendy's head "hurt like hell", which is probably not a phrase an 8 year old would use. Other than that, the story seems to be going very well. Keep up the good work