ElizabethDiamond
@ice_HUNTRESS a second pair of eyes is the best way. I know it can be tough to trust people with your work. Find someone who is like minded and understands what you are trying to do, whose judgement you trust. Go off track and see where it takes you. Do you want to write a different story? If so write that one. When you come back to edit/re-write it decide what the story is really about and what it means to you. If it is important to stick with your plan make sure you are enthused by it.