Erg. I only caught some of that last message. I think it has something to do with me and electronical devices. They always go screwy when I'm around them. That saying... a bit of sound advice. YOU.ARE.A VERY.GOOD.WRITER. You have the potential to do great things with it. I've read a lot so I can say that with certainty: https://www.goodreads.com/user/show/17368496-cozen
I have seen writers from here make it over in self publishing (though I loath Tijan at the moment). And I can say this with certainty. Your base readers here will follow you off a cliff, but you'll need to leave a trail of bread crumbs so they can follow you off it. In other words, update status and keep us informed of what you have plans for you stories. Unlike a lot of writers here, it has been quite irritating to start reading a good story only to have it suspended in limbo for us to have to wait and see if it still is going to have more chapters since their other stories are still being released.
Anyway, keep being inspired.