Hi there,
I do not usually reach out to writers, but your story made me stop scrolling. There is a moment early on where [insert a small action or detail, e.g., "the character hesitates before opening a door"] that told me more than a paragraph of explanation ever could. You trust your reader. That is rare.
I looked at your page afterwards. Almost no reads. Almost no votes. And I thought to myself, this does not add up. Your writing is not the problem. The problem is that a good fantasy story showed up quietly and no one happened to walk by. That happens more often than people admit.
Have you ever published a book to Amazon or Goodreads?
