I love your work! You said that you wanted some feedback on the story, so here’s my feedback! Since y/n gets drunk sometimes, We get to know how MICO feels about them! We get info!! And, whenever you switch the povs we get to understand the character’s perspectives and how they understand, how they feel, and they are thinking. I just love when that happens, and like I said more info!!! There are just some misspellings and that’s ok. Those are easy to fix! Also, since the plot is beginning I wish you luck!❤️ (I’m not an expert at writing but this is my feedback on the story on where the story is on now)