Emaline_Emmziez

So the one shot message you have to scroll down a bit for but PLEASE give me some feedback on it!

0V3RK1LL_INTHEARTS

I love your work! You said that you wanted some feedback on the story, so here’s my feedback! Since y/n gets drunk sometimes, We get to know how MICO feels about them! We get info!! And, whenever you switch the povs we get to understand the character’s perspectives and how they understand, how they feel, and they are thinking. I just love when that happens, and like I said more info!!! There are just some misspellings and that’s ok. Those are easy to fix! Also, since the plot is beginning I wish you luck!❤️ (I’m not an expert at writing but this is my feedback on the story on where the story is on now)

0V3RK1LL_INTHEARTS

Same, I get more productive at night but I’m tired lmao Also, NP! I really love where the story is going!❤️❤️
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Emaline_Emmziez

HAHAH... yeah... the typos are because i write these LATEEE cause thats when im mosy creative and overcome my writers block but i end up with some pretty crazy typo and grammar issues... Anyway TYSM❤️❤️
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dontneedtk

Emaline, when I catch Judas I swear!! Girl I ain’t rushing you or smt but you better make a chapter where we tak to Mico and it all gets better!!

iloveamiaakiyama

@Emaline_Emmziez NO PLEASE MAKE THAT KINDA CHAPTER
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