EmilyJayH

HEY! I updated part 2!!!!! Made it longer and.... more? Idk there’s more going on. 
          	Should I include more detail of where they are at? 
          	I just feel like I’m really good at dialog but also good at describing scenes but not good at doing both. so it’s like a one or the other situation. 
          	Someone please tell me what I can improve on

EmilyJayH

HEY! I updated part 2!!!!! Made it longer and.... more? Idk there’s more going on. 
          Should I include more detail of where they are at? 
          I just feel like I’m really good at dialog but also good at describing scenes but not good at doing both. so it’s like a one or the other situation. 
          Someone please tell me what I can improve on

EmilyJayH

YALL
          Immmmmm Drunk 
          Baby is sleeping in his swing
          Husband fell asleep after I died five times in Mario Odyssey
          Lol 
          Seriously
          Tbt to when I use to be a wee little baby who would weird all the time
          Now I can barely write a few sentences without getting TOTAL block 
          Is it because I’m old and I think too much? 
          I’m not even that old 
          OMG IM GOIING TO BE 21 NEXT MONTH WTF
          I CAN GO TO A BAR AND BE LIKE “ALCOHOL. NOW” 
          Wow that’s crayyyzy
          Will I? 
          No
          I have a baby to take care of
          Lol what is life
          Ahahhahahahahahaaaaaa