edwardnelson558
@EphemeralWolf I really enjoyed the way your story Ichigo Ichie (Saiki Kusuo). It felt complete and thoughtful and it stayed consistent with the tone from the beginning. That kind of balance is not easy to maintain. At the same time I feel like there’s still room to expand a few moments and make them even more powerful. I’d honestly enjoy talking it through with you and sharing a few ideas while also hearing more about your vision. We can continue on insta and discord with the same name edward_nelson01
edwardnelson558
@EphemeralWolf Yeah thats nice I think well do you have any other social or mail where we can discuss about it and I really sorry for the late reply
EphemeralWolf
@edwardnelson558 Thank you for the thoughtful comment! You're right, I could expand it. The chapters are shorter than what I would normally write since the whole thing was a little thought experiment of whether I could write Saiki in this situation and keep him as himself.