@GINgoldstein Your story is truly good so i don't really have anything to say.But can u write a story where Shiho is in love with Shinichi,but its u
unrequited one,at least for some times.So,Shiho will leave him only then will he realize his true feeling.U know i have an idea but too lazy to write.Your book is really great so be more confident and goodluck for your future work.