Espeon804

Book 5 Chapter 9 upload tomorrow??? (Most likely)
          	
          	I know I said until up to 12 is done, but 10 is 80% done along with 11 and 12 so, hey. Why not?
          	
          	It's actually a pretty interesting chapter. (As in it was very fun to write hehe)
          	
          	"What's going to happen on chapter 9, Espeon?"
          	
          	You know...
          	
          	Chaos.
          	
          	Wizards.
          	
          	Saiyans being Saiyans.
          	
          	Gods being gods.

Espeon804

Book 5 Chapter 9 upload tomorrow??? (Most likely)
          
          I know I said until up to 12 is done, but 10 is 80% done along with 11 and 12 so, hey. Why not?
          
          It's actually a pretty interesting chapter. (As in it was very fun to write hehe)
          
          "What's going to happen on chapter 9, Espeon?"
          
          You know...
          
          Chaos.
          
          Wizards.
          
          Saiyans being Saiyans.
          
          Gods being gods.

Espeon804

Book 5 OTES Progress Report:
          
          Chapter 9 has gone through a second draft but it's still ehhhhh so I'll edit it some more. I'm not sure when it will be published. Maybe next week? Depends on how I feel.
          
          Chapter 10 is nearly done. It's giving me a hard time.
          
          Chapters 11 and 12 are uhhh 60% done? 12 is more completed than 11 because it's easier to work with (Ironically. You won't get it until you get there.)
          
          Chapters 13-15 have been touched up a bit. 16 is INTERESTING. I wish I can talk about it but I can't.
          
          Chapters 17-21 have been plotted. It's not official on what will happen there but I have a good idea on what will happen.
          
          What I can do I say this:
          
          12, 16, 18 and 21.
          
          Very funny chapters guys. Very funny indeed.
          
          And you look at 21 and ask "Wait how many chapters is book 5 going to have?"
          
          21 is merely the midway point. I have a feeling this book will have around 40 or more. The Buu saga is HUGE.
          
          Anyways, be on the lookout for chapter 9!
          
          
          "You'll become predictable, adaptable, et cetera, what you suggest is obsolete.”
          
          "Your pride as a Saiyan does not matter here.”

TheSaiyanLotus

Hi! I wanted to thank you for making my week  with the book "Ask Or Dare The Sayians", please update it more. I really like it!
          

Espeon804

@TheSaiyanLotus Whoa! I didn't think anyone would bother with it since it's been abandoned for several years. 
            
            I'll say that my interest in the Ask or Dare had fallen off years ago, hence why it hasn't been updated in so long. I started this series as a teenager and had a lot of fun with the side things, but now I'm just focused on writing.
            
            Maybe??? I might update it??? It's not a guarantee, but considering book 5 has new characters I can work with, it does sound a bit interesting. I'll think about it. 
            
            I'm glad to have made your week though!
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TheSaiyanLotus

@ Espeon804  I AM HONESTLY SURPRISED YOU ANSWERD OMG TANK YOU SO MUCH YOU'RE THE REASON I DOWNLOADED WATTPAD AND I AM VERY VERY GRATEFUL! YOU MADE MY GOOD MOOD THAT ALREADY MANAGED TO FLY OUT THE WINDOW TWICE TODAY BACK! I AM VERY GRATEFUL, THAT IS WHY I AM WRITING IN ALL CAPS! :D
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TheSaiyanLotus

@ TheSaiyanLotus  *Saiyans. I apologize for the misspelling. lol.
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Espeon804

Book 5 chapter 9 and 10 scene sneak peaks because it's perhaps my favorites in the two chapters.
          
          (First draft so they are rough as heck. Will be tweaked and polished!)
          
          Of course these are spoilers if you somehow manage to pick through these and figure out what happened before said scenes, but nah.
          
          You get no context so have fun.
          
          
                                                      Ch. 9
                                   - Moments Before Disaster -
          
          ****
          
          “Outstanding!” Shin exclaims, startling them both. “They have developed speech now?!”
          
          He pops up to Raditz's right.
          
          “This is an incredible development—oh a shame it is they've died out.”
          
          Then his left.
          
          “They would have surely evolved into an advanced species if given the chance— This is incredibly fascinating indeed!”
          
          “Uh…” Raditz can only awkwardly turn his head as Shin continues to observe the subject of interest from all angles. “A little space…?”
          
          ----------------
          
                                                        Ch. 10
                                     - Because My Boss Said So -
          
          ***
          
          Kibito's glare burns hot. “Just what do you—”
          
          He stops, his words caught in his throat. Karot was already prepared to take a belittlement, but it never came.
          
          Kibito closes his eyes with a sigh, and he takes a step back. “Child.”
          
          Karot blinks. Kibito's tone was that of compressed anger. “Yes?”
          
          “It would be wise for you to think before you make such hasty statements,” Kibito tells him. “This is hardly the place to jest.”
          
          Karot can feel the stillness in the air. His uncle looks far more confused than he does. At least Karot knows he's not the only one lost by the strange shift in Kibito's attitude.
          
          ‘It’s like he's too scared to say what he wants…’ Karot mentally notes. ‘He absolutely hates our guts, but his loyalty to the Supreme Kai is incredible…’
          
          Kibito heard him. Karot knows, because his face twists in a way that is a mix of confusion and offendedness.
          
          -------
          
          (See comment for progress report)

Espeon804

Progress Report:
            
            The plan is to at least have the first drafts of chapters 9 - 12 done before I begin to update again, and 13-16 to have several scenes done. I've been working on these chapters since March bit by bit.
            
            "How are you writing so much?"
            
            What if I told you I do all my writing on a phone? Whenever I catch a break I work on a chapter a little bit. Unfortunately, I don't have that crazy writing power I had ten years ago but hey.
            
            9-16 are planned. As in, I know exactly what's going to happen. Many scenes have been typed out already. I'm trying a new strategy to write so that updates don't take 5 months at a time. 
            
            Chapters 9-16 have their chapter summaries written down! Hooray!
            
            Anyways that's all I'm willing to share now. Wattpad readers are lucky because Fanfiction and Quotev don't get sneak peaks like these lol
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Espeon804

OTES progress report!
          
          As I mentioned before, book 5 won't have any updates for quite some time. However, chapter 9's first draft is complete, and chapters 9-16 all have official titles now.
          
          Chapter 16 being the first to break the tradition of how the titles are styled.
          
          But anyways, because I am normal about how I handle these stories, I would like to share some inspiration behind how it is structured. I talked about how Kai's episodes names and episode previews leaked into the books long ago.
          
          I actually really love writing the "Next Time" segments. I dunno. It's funny breaking the fourth wall with the characters talking about what's going to happen, lol. And I've had the most fun writing  these segments in chapters 11, 14, and 15. Keep an eye on those.
          
          So here I shall give you all a look into the very inspiration behind the chapter titles and the "Next Time" segments at the end of each chapter.
          
          Saiyan Saga:
          
          Episode 10: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9Ida5PFk01s
          
          Episode 11:
          https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SUGBP6md9aw
          
          Episode 15: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TFuHN65SPgc
          
          Frieza Saga:
          
          Episode 54: (A favorite) https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OLI8EGOXewQ
          
          Cell Saga:
          
          Episode 75: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=F4BPHmVz3Ec
          
          Episode 77: (A favorite) https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ECwR3JJTuMo
          
          Episode 79: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=y6hwbThLB1E
          
          It was hard to find the ones with the original soundtrack (understandly)
          
          Anyways, I may give another update soon. Depends on what happens. 
          
          I've decided to give updates instead of going radio silent like before. Because months between posts seems odd. Lol

Espeon804

YO! OTES ANNOUNCEMENT!
          
          Apparently, this series has a page on TV Tropes now?!!! What? How long was it up there, because I just stumbled across it recently!
          
          See, I only ever reread my stuff here on the Wattpad app, (or the Fanfiction app) so the one rare time I looked it up on the browser, it was there. And I had to double-take. Lol.
          
          Whoever put it together, a thousand THANK YOUS because that was the ultimate jumpscare. (A good jumpscare.) It just makes me happy knowing people are enjoying this series.
          
          (I really do want to properly thank whoever put it together, but I can't find the name, unless I'm looking at something wrong?)
          
          (Maybe I need to make an account to see, but I don't really use TV Tropes so I don't understand the site all too well.)
          
          BUT SEEING EVERYTHING LISTED is so darn cool! You all are AMAZING! It really made my day. Couldn't stop smiling lol.
          
          Anyways, I guess if anyone wants to take a look? It's well-put together!
          
          If there is anyone who uses TV Tropes, I guess you're free to add to it? (I have no idea if it's like a wiki page or not lol)
          
          CHECK IT OUT:
          
          The entire series: https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Fanfic/OfTheEarthlingSaiyan
          
          Book 1: https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Fanfic/TheWrathOfTheEarthlingSaiyan
          Book 2: https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Fanfic/TheRetaliationOfTheEarthlingSaiyan
          Book 3: https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Fanfic/TheForgottenPastOfTheEarthlingSaiyan
          Book 4: https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Fanfic/TheDissonanceOfTheEarthlingSaiyan
          
          The Halloween Special is also there. Whoa.
          
          Seriously this is super cool. Like VERY cool.
          
          And now Book 5 is up and running with EIGHT chapters so far. I think it's safe to say it's going to be the biggest book. (It's paused as of now. Won't be an update for a month or two because I'm!!! Working on chapters 9-16 at once!!!)
          
          I still can't believe I am just now finding this because it looks like it's been up here for a while lol.

Espeon804

So I found out in chapter 7 of "The Bewitchment of The Earthling Saiyan" is being stubborn about allowing comments for some reason. (I only found out because I was wanting to add a note in a paragraph but it wasn't happening, unfortunately. Oh well.)
          
          I don't know if it's a glitch on Wattpad or not. 
          
          What I WANTED to say was that the sparring match there (I won't say what for the sake of spoilers) is a nod towards Goku and Zamasu's sparring match in Super.
          
          Take a look: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HhVYlcp5EHY
          
          It's actually one of my most favorite matches (despite how one-sided it is)
          
          I probably should have added that to my author notes but I forgot. Oh well.
          
          But there was some judo sprinkled in the chapter.
          
          Anyways if you tried to leave a comment on chapter 7, I'm sorry. I can't control what going on. 

Espeon804

@ChibiMiraiGogeta Yeah. It's a bit annoying but there's not much I can do.
            If you can because I would love to hear your thoughts! I just wish I know what the heck is going on. It's so weird it's only that chapter.
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ChibiMiraiGogeta

It's not just you. I can't say anything in that chapter. I might just have to write down everything in a separate post or try in the next chapter (I'm starting to catch up).
            
            Unless Wattpad's found another reason not to let people post things now and is being evil.
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Espeon804

Some fun OTES background:
          
          Around 8 years ago, I decided to take Chinese 1 as my elective because I already took Spanish 1 and 2. Wanted to do something different.
          
          My teacher was a fun lady. She always tried to find ways to make learning Mandarin easier for the students. So one class she pulled up a video that reviewed counting.
          
          It was the goofiest video I've ever seen. The entire class was amused. And you know what? The song got stuck in my head. I guess...it worked? That's a good thing?
          
          Also around the time, I was watching a Sun Wukong cartoon. So you see where this is going. This was around the time book 2 was drawing near it's end. So when book 3 rolled in, The Golden Crown of Restraint came to be. Of course this is explained in book 3 but it's still funny to look back on.
          
          It took ONE goofy video. Only one. 
          
          BEHOLD. The sole video that sparked the very creation of the crown's chant. 
          
          https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2eLP3FuuEVs
          
          There is your OTES funfact I guess.
          
          Book 5 has finally touched on some lore about the crown, so I've been thinking about it today.

Espeon804

@-rmii_ Honestly I think music is one of the most effective teaching methods.
            I still have some songs from my Spanish classes memorized lol
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-rmii_

@Espeon804 When I took JPN 100, our teacher showed us a video about counting people from 1-10 that had music that would belong in racing movies, and it's still in my head to this day.
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Espeon804

ATTENTION OTES READERS: Chapter 8 of "The Bewitchment of The Earthling Saiyan" is HERE! And it's a big one. 
          
          ANOTHER ANNOUNCEMENT: It will be a while until we get another update. As I said before, I want to pace myself, so I'll be taking a step back from updating this story for a while. (Don't worry! It's still being worked on!)
          
          This means if you are behind, this is the perfect time to catch up!
          
          Hope you enjoy this chapter!
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/390071290