Espeon804

OTES Book 5 Chapter 17 Progress Report 01/09:
          	
          	Nothing to report unfortunately. I've taken a break from writing OTES because burn-out on this story was catching up to me. So there won't be an update this month. (Or likely in February. Depends!)
          	
          	Just wanted to let anyone know since it's been a while since the last progress report! (Also I don't have all the free time I did when I was younger. So there's also that.)
          	
          	Of course I do wish to push the story forward since there are more chapters I am absolutely looking forward to, so the break shouldn't be too long, knocking on wood.
          	
          	Sorry to disappoint you if you were hoping for progress.
          	
          	-Espeon804

Espeon804

OTES Book 5 Chapter 17 Progress Report 01/09:
          
          Nothing to report unfortunately. I've taken a break from writing OTES because burn-out on this story was catching up to me. So there won't be an update this month. (Or likely in February. Depends!)
          
          Just wanted to let anyone know since it's been a while since the last progress report! (Also I don't have all the free time I did when I was younger. So there's also that.)
          
          Of course I do wish to push the story forward since there are more chapters I am absolutely looking forward to, so the break shouldn't be too long, knocking on wood.
          
          Sorry to disappoint you if you were hoping for progress.
          
          -Espeon804

Espeon804

Hello OTES readers! Curious question.
          
          What is/are your favorite scene(s) from Book 5? I might go around to drawing it one day? (Not a promise, but I've been wanting to get back to doing book art like I did years ago.) So if there are any favorites you may want to see drawn, tell me in the comments!

Lalala112

@Espeon804 Shins soul-fetch scene
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Espeon804

ATTENTION OTES fans! Chapter 16 of "The Bewitchment of The Earthling Saiyan" is HERE AT LAST! Read and enjoy.
          
          So editing took waaaaay longer than I thought. I'm sick of looking at this chapter. (I love it, but I'm tiiiired)
          
          AAAAGH
          
          FINALLY.
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/390071290

TheSaiyanLotus

@ Espeon804  It's okay, it isn't your fault
            
            And also, I use the app, and I wrote a book (it's a random one, you don't have to check it)
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Espeon804

@TheSaiyanLotus Not sure what it is. It works fine on my end. Another user was able to comment too.
            
            Dunno if you are using the browser or the app, but usually for the app I just uninstall and that sometimes fixes it. I'm sorry it's being weird.
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TheSaiyanLotus

@ Espeon804  Couldn't respond normally, but, uh, the commemts don't really work as intended... (it sends me to Chapter 14 with an error message)
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Espeon804

OTES Book 5 Chapter 16 Progress Report 12/15:
          
          CHAPTER 16 IS DONE!!! 19k words!!!
          
          On top of that, chapter 16 will be the last update for a WHILE. But now that chapter 16 is done I at least know how to handle 17. Couldn't make any progress on 17 since it is connected to what happens in 16 so much.
          
          Again, as I always say, this chapter is a mess. But this one in particular is an ugly mess at the beginning I especially have to work on. There are several scenes that need a lot of polishing before I feel it's anywhere ready to be released. It's pretty much a case of "write down what you know will happen" because filling in the details is the easy part for me. 
          
          So an update is likely two days from today? It really depends. It could come out tomorrow. Or not. Depends on how the editing goes.
          
          Keep an eye out! This chapter is gonna be interesting!
          
          I hope you are ready.
          
          -Espeon804
          
          ***
          
          “Do you not understand the enormity of destruction this will bring?!
          
          “It's not just Majin Buu who will awaken! The demon of hatred will feed off of your negative emotions! Goku will be reduced to nothing! I won't be able to save him!
          
          "Both of you will stand down this instant!”

Lalala112

@Espeon804 yay, not only the oneshot about Shin on my birthday, now this feels like early Christmas ^^
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TheSaiyanLotus

@ Espeon804  Wish you luck editing this easily! :D
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Espeon804

OTES Book 5 Chapter 16 update 12/12:
          
          Chapter 16 has 16k words! I haven't really worked on it much because ofc Holiday season reasons. I'm beginning to think we won't see an update until next year. (Lol)
          
          BUT I can say I've finished the more difficult parts of the story and now it flows better!!! Literally, all I have LEFT TO WRITE is the beginning and aaaaall the buildup. Which is actually very easy. Like I know EXACTLY what I need to write. In fact I'm confident this chapter will have around 20-22k words by the time I'm done with the first draft. Let's see how accurate I am.
          
          I am very, very, very excited for this chapter. Like I said I was excited for chapter 6, 12, 15, and now 16!!! I've plotted 16 all the way back in APRIL that's how excited I was!!!!
          
          Yes, I've been working on these chapters as far back as April by writing one scene after the other and it builds up over time but!!! Enough of that! I'm just EXCITED ok. But I CAN'T work on it because BUSY so I'm just AAAAAH!!!
          
          LOOK FORWARD for Chapter 16!! I guess.
          
          Here's a familiar sparta remix I've shared before but I'm sharing it again because favorite pkmn movie.
          
          Yeah you can tell I'm excited so ignore typos ig
          
          See yaaaaa
          
          https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pFwFMQ_Slxg