Your story is one of the few able to make me cry. For example, the first book I cried about was “Where the Red Fern Grows.” I cried when I read the fanfic on Fanfiction.net called “The Girl in the Straw Hat.” I will say, I love how detailed the chapters are, and the length is long enough that it CAN be descriptive, but I like Amour more than I like the battling, so it is a bit of a tedious read for me. That first chapter was so magnificent, so splendid, so…. Marvelous!!!!! I cried right there. I loved it so much. Thanks for writing this book. Just don’t EVER forget about the book and not finish it. I will never forgive you.