Eyolice

Whole new story in the works. Memories is now no more than a concept though the characters are the same and will eventually lead to events like what take place in memories I’ve found it’s more fun to write out a character from start to finish rather than saying “this is who they are because this is who they are.” 
          The new story will take three varying perspectives through Privateers, a trio of survivors and a renegade (odd way of putting it but I’ll save it for the description) anyway hope you enjoy my convolutions and poor sentence structure throughout this next draft. 

Hero (Chapter 3 of Memories) has been redone. Descriptions, better dialogue, and a better idea of Alice's character included. From 1400 words to 3000. Long way to go for this book to be finished, but it's something to do.

Hero (Chapter 3 of Memories) is about halfway done. I plan to complete Memories at least for now before continuing Renegades. Mainly because Memories beginning chapters are so bad it's hard to read.

Memories has been finished on the basis of chapters, though it is not yet completed. I still have to edit the chapters, and to add many more detailed descriptions to characters and locations. As you may have realized, many characters have yet to be even described. That was not on purpose, but because I was rushing to get it out for no foreseeable reason. To those who have read my story (and the probably very very few who actually enjoyed and understood it), thank you for the support over the last six months. If anyone has ideas for story building or characters, I'm all ears. This is an open project.