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I know that you're in need of some help in your story. And if you want to improve just give it a try in my critique shop. 
          
          Here's the link: https://my.w.tt/sgYgeNu7UR
          
          The following are the parts that I will critique in your story.
          
          Outer Parts:
          
          ☑ Title
          
          ☑ Book Cover
          
          ☑ Blurb
          
          
          Inner Parts:
          
          ☑ Plot:
              ☑ Exposition
              ☑ Conflict
              ☑ Conclusion
              ☑ Phasing
          
          ☑ Narration:
              ☑ Spelling and Grammar
              ☑ Show vs. Tell
              ☑ Choice of words
              ☑ Style
              ☑ POV
          
          ☑ Characters:
              ☑ Character Development
              ☑ Dialogue
          
          ☑ Strengths and Weaknesses

Hi Yuri~chan. Thanks for the follow. ^_^

Thanks for following hope you can read some of my stories thank you 

Hi,beh!!!
          
          ako to 

hello. baka gusto mo pong sumali sa book club kom for more comments and readers and voters sa story mo. 
          
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thanks!

hi~ thanks for the follow..i'll follow u back in my other account @aiyanonimous04 ..thanks
          
          
          ~xoxo_elle

Hey... thanks for following me... hope you'll read my story/ies.... ^_^

.thanks for following. hope you guys can check my work ..

thanks for following! :)