
Cormaclaggen
I know that you're in need of some help in your story. And if you want to improve just give it a try in my critique shop. Here's the link: https://my.w.tt/sgYgeNu7UR The following are the parts that I will critique in your story. Outer Parts: ☑ Title ☑ Book Cover ☑ Blurb Inner Parts: ☑ Plot: ☑ Exposition ☑ Conflict ☑ Conclusion ☑ Phasing ☑ Narration: ☑ Spelling and Grammar ☑ Show vs. Tell ☑ Choice of words ☑ Style ☑ POV ☑ Characters: ☑ Character Development ☑ Dialogue ☑ Strengths and Weaknesses