Hello FireCobra~I came across your work because yo added my "The Tattooed Princess: Book Two." I like what you're doing with your own fiction. You have a good narrative voice and eye for detail. A good storyteller generally. I feel what your story needs to get more readers returning to it on this crazy site is some good old fashioned sexxual tension brewing beneath the surface. Yeah, that.
Let's not forget your readers are 90% female age between 14-44, and hormonally curious--just like you, right? They use fiction as a secret outlet for their passions and fantasies--so let's not disappoint them. Give them what they're looking for, chapter after chapter.
As we girls know, the anticipation of sexx and romance is almost as powerful as getting it--correct? So always tease your teen and YA readers into the next chapter for more. What your story seems to lack is the inner feelings (and pulsing desires) of your characters, expressed to the reader more explicitly (but not necessarily overly graphically). Yeah it really is about that to a large extent on Wattpad.
I'm sending you a short story of mine--just 4 parts, to demonstrate this. Trust me it's helped a lot of budding writers get more reads and votes on Wattpad. The 4th part (attached) was given a "R-Private" rating, limited only to followers (woo woo !) But don't mind that--consider this a random act of kindness.
Enjoy. (Best to read the last chapter while home alone--you'll see why. Be good to yourself) :)
https://www.wattpad.com/52450827-a-walk-in-the-countryside-part-4
https://www.wattpad.com/story/16999941-a-walk-in-the-countryside
~~Califia
