@Fatedblades is good the only thing you could have done was flush out the story mote like how are the servants here and why and just expanding the lore
Hi @Firescout02
Thanks for adding #ShadowOfThePastTrilogy ∞ The Displaced to your reading list! Don't hesitate to comment or ask questions, I'd love to hear what you think :-)
BTW, I’m curious: how did you find my book?