CheshireCat224

Can I ask though even though you gave me a tip on what to do in my book the mad hatters back story like separate into paragraphs could I ask is my punctuation good ? I really want to know I think I'm struggling a little with it like I don't know where to put full stops then I worry if I put them in a wrong place 

FitzTheWriter

@CheshireCat224 you read your sentences,and when your feeling your out of breath put a full stop there.I think thats the way,cause i do the same thing and it turns out okay :) so try it 
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LunasApprentice

thanks 4 following! :)

FitzTheWriter

@LunasApprentice thanks,thats great coming from you..Yours is great too
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