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@Flowerchild_3 well I'm glad to hear it. Lol seriously though, thank you. That means so much. And yes I know what you mean. There are way too many of them. I vowed to write something different and original. It's nice knowing I've succeeded. Thanks again, you're amazing! :)

Hi @Flowerchild_3 just wanted to thank you for reading Always the Bride. I'm so glad you're enjoying it so far. :)
          
          Btw love your profile. I'm a cat lover too! Unfortunately where I live I can't have pets but I get my fix when I visit my parents. Lol
          
          Oh and it's also nice to meet a fellow grammar nazi. I'm the same. It's hard to pick up your own mistakes so my stories may a few that I miss but I try really hard not to make them. If you spot any in mine, feel free to point them out. It's unedited right now but hopefully for not much longer. :)

@gemchocoholic123 I'm sorry, but the story is grammatically incorrect, the description needs work (it doesn't draw in a reader), and the way you opened the story is was to typical. Everyone does the alarm clock thing. The way you introduce other characters isn't good, and it's obvious you're 12. I'm not trying to be rude, but it's definitely not something I can read, because its poorly written.

@Flowerchild_3  thank you soo much x:-) :-) 
          

@gemchocoholic123 Yeah, I can give you my opinion and let ya know. :)

@gemchocoholic123  and please could you read my book and comment on it on how I could improve, thanks a lot xx:-)

I love cats I have two grown ones, boy and girl and they've had kittens ahhh!!! 4 of them xx OMG they are so cute