Francesca

Hi, i dont really want to ask for alot but would you mind checking out my story and letting me know what you think about it so far, also maybe recommend to your friends? Thank you

I think you've disappeared.... :(

Np :) Come back and finish when you can, there's another surprise waiting. The setting - coffee shop - they don't stay there long so I kept the details minimal because it wasn't important to the story. Hope to hear from you soon, and great first chapter. Left you a comment and vote ^.^

Okay, I'll go critique it now!  here's a link to my story Midnight Moiety:  http://www.wattpad.com/1384093-midnight-moiety

http://www.wattpad.com/1386155-the-entertainment what story would you like me to critique in exchange?

@SheaRyhai sure!  If you give me a link to the story you want me to critique, I can!

Hey are you still exchanging critiques?

@jac809 you're welcome!  Thanks for fanning and critiquing me, too! :D

thanks for becoming my fan and critiquing my story!!

@arfie14 no problem! :)