Frmdeath

I would greatly appreciate any tips or advice on how to improve my writing. Thank you for your help!

Frmdeath

@MRK0107
          	  Thank you very much! I will certainly take advantage of this as I continue working on the book.
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MRK0107

@Frmdeath Your writing is already good. But to make it better you can also add details about the surroundings to enhance the reader's experience.
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MRK0107

Hey! I’ve been working on a story called Between Pages ( https://www.wattpad.com/story/369807579-between-pages ), and I’d love for you to check it out.  
          
          If you do read it, I’d be so grateful for your thoughts and feedback! Reviews or comments mean a lot and really help me grow as a writer.  
          
          If it’s not something you’re interested in, no worries at all—feel free to ignore  or remove this message!  
          
          Thanks so much for your support, and happy reading!  (https://www.wattpad.com/story/369807579-between-pages)

Frmdeath

I would greatly appreciate any tips or advice on how to improve my writing. Thank you for your help!

Frmdeath

@MRK0107
            Thank you very much! I will certainly take advantage of this as I continue working on the book.
Reply

MRK0107

@Frmdeath Your writing is already good. But to make it better you can also add details about the surroundings to enhance the reader's experience.
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